Girl, I know you wrote this a while ago, but I've just now read it. And ate it up. Like dessert. I want seconds. :)
My eyes were like *__* half the time, but I think what made it work is that your sentence structures and word choices gave this "rated-omg-get-the-kids-out" fanfic a sort of soft afterglow. I didn't feel dirty reading it, even though content-wise, I should have been washing my face with ice-cold water, lol. I think my favorite line in this whole fanfic was "whether in protest, pleasure or in protest of pleasure denied, Jun neither knew nor cared" It just oozes lust.
I kept Juntoshi an innocent bond in my head, but now, I'm having a hard time keeping dirty thoughts away... this is going to be all your fault. ;)
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Date: 2009-08-12 09:59 am (UTC)My eyes were like *__* half the time, but I think what made it work is that your sentence structures and word choices gave this "rated-omg-get-the-kids-out" fanfic a sort of soft afterglow. I didn't feel dirty reading it, even though content-wise, I should have been washing my face with ice-cold water, lol. I think my favorite line in this whole fanfic was "whether in protest, pleasure or in protest of pleasure denied, Jun neither knew nor cared" It just oozes lust.
I kept Juntoshi an innocent bond in my head, but now, I'm having a hard time keeping dirty thoughts away... this is going to be all your fault. ;)