I had just finished all three parts of this story and I have to say... This is majorly cu~te!
I love Jay-kun and all his lil' toddler antics <3 He's such a smart kid that I've really grown to like him in the... 30 mins when I was reading your story~
I found myself laughing while reading about Aiba and Jay-kun together, grinning like an idiot at some parts of this story (esp at the cho~ kawaii Sakuraiba and the Ohmiya proposal XD), and smile at the close bond of Arashi you portrayed in this ficcie.
I really adore your writing style; a cool, easy pace as the story flows and the throw of vocabulary is good enough to give the reader some intrigue. I'm definitely coming back here for more of your fics <3
Please write more!
*now stalking your other Sakuraiba series XD* I'm gonna enjoy it, for sure!
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Date: 2009-08-18 12:34 am (UTC)I love Jay-kun and all his lil' toddler antics <3 He's such a smart kid that I've really grown to like him in the... 30 mins when I was reading your story~
I found myself laughing while reading about Aiba and Jay-kun together, grinning like an idiot at some parts of this story (esp at the cho~ kawaii Sakuraiba and the Ohmiya proposal XD), and smile at the close bond of Arashi you portrayed in this ficcie.
I really adore your writing style; a cool, easy pace as the story flows and the throw of vocabulary is good enough to give the reader some intrigue. I'm definitely coming back here for more of your fics <3
Please write more!
*now stalking your other Sakuraiba series XD* I'm gonna enjoy it, for sure!
*Do you mind if I add you?