With more fluff to come in the last part! \^o^/ YAY~!
Guh... >.< typos.... That'll teach me for typing up the hardcopy without leaving myself two days to rest before proof-reading. Thanks for pointing them out, I fixed them now. (Although the first one is actaully an apostophe fail. I changed it to: "Sakurai’s manager drove while Masakis' [manager] sat with the younger men."
Ah~ if only Sakuraiba could have been fixed that easily, huh? XD
I'm so glad I didn't disappoint though; I never realised before how much pressure there is when writing the END of something.
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Guh... >.< typos.... That'll teach me for typing up the hardcopy without leaving myself two days to rest before proof-reading. Thanks for pointing them out, I fixed them now. (Although the first one is actaully an apostophe fail. I changed it to: "Sakurai’s manager drove while Masakis' [manager] sat with the younger men."
Ah~ if only Sakuraiba could have been fixed that easily, huh? XD
I'm so glad I didn't disappoint though; I never realised before how much pressure there is when writing the END of something.