Anyway, yeah, back to the comment XD: the way you portray the Arashi members in here are so... believable! (Aiba and his Liquid Nitrogen= loool) I actually caught myself thinking 'what if something like this could actually happen?'
I found a few small typos in this (I copied the whole series into my computer if you don't mind...) when my Word picked it up. Small stuff like the apostrophe and the comma, but nothing big and distracting *issuchanerdXD*
I'm enjoying the pace of this story; slow, yet enough for me to keep going! You, my friend, are doing a great job!! Keep it up! :D
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Riida... actually led! O_o
Anyway, yeah, back to the comment XD: the way you portray the Arashi members in here are so... believable! (Aiba and his Liquid Nitrogen= loool) I actually caught myself thinking 'what if something like this could actually happen?'
I found a few small typos in this (I copied the whole series into my computer if you don't mind...) when my Word picked it up. Small stuff like the apostrophe and the comma, but nothing big and distracting
*issuchanerdXD*I'm enjoying the pace of this story; slow, yet enough for me to keep going! You, my friend, are doing a great job!! Keep it up! :D
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