I agree that it wasn't as dirty as you made it sound. ^.^ It was about as typical sex scene as it gets.
I like Ohno's character: he knows he's got no experience, but that doesn't stop him from being like "so let's go already".
Throwing in "I've been in love with you for 10 years" seemed a little... empty? You didn't really say anything else about it, so I'm not sure that Jun would suddenly confront Ohno about it after all that time. It would have been better if you had included an incident that made him talk to Ohno about it or make it even more vague than you did "I've liked him since I first met him" but not necessarily love or he thought he didn't have a chance, something like that.
The last was really funny, though, when Jun asked if Ohno brought extra pants. XD Of course he wouldn't think of that, silly. All over, very satisfying.
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I like Ohno's character: he knows he's got no experience, but that doesn't stop him from being like "so let's go already".
Throwing in "I've been in love with you for 10 years" seemed a little... empty? You didn't really say anything else about it, so I'm not sure that Jun would suddenly confront Ohno about it after all that time. It would have been better if you had included an incident that made him talk to Ohno about it or make it even more vague than you did "I've liked him since I first met him" but not necessarily love or he thought he didn't have a chance, something like that.
The last was really funny, though, when Jun asked if Ohno brought extra pants. XD Of course he wouldn't think of that, silly. All over, very satisfying.