http://amnosxmatsujun.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] amnosxmatsujun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amh1988 2009-09-05 05:09 am (UTC)

Sweetie, I read all three chapters in one sitting. :D Aiba daddy is so cute!

I really enjoyed the Ohmiya in the middle. There's something about the way you've described their interaction that I enjoy. I may be the supressed jealousy I hear in Nino's sarcasm, it may be how Ohno seems to know how to "handle" the brat. In any case, I thought it was a nice side story.

When you had Aiba talk to the baby in Engrish, I could almost hear his voice. What a treat before Aiba daddy in My Girl! <3

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